Writing Tips
Hey there, folks!
So, I've had a few people ask me recently about my writing history here and elsewhere -- looking at you Fede! -- and whether I had any tips to share. For those that don't know, I've been writing and posting stuff online for well over a decade now. I started firstly on Fanfiction.net with Dragon Ball Z and Monster Hunter stories, before transitioning over to Bleach. That was when I joined Wikia. Naruto, Gears of War, and Star Wars entered the mix and eventually fell off the radar and, recently, Sword Art Online has become my focus.
Quite the resume, eh? They must think age equals wisdom!
In the beginning my writing wasn't anything to write home about. I've managed to purge the majority of it from the internet, thankfully, but…
SAOK: The 76th Floor and Beyond!
Hey there, folks!
As things currently stand my story is steaming along at a nice pace. Part I wrapped up at the start of 2020 and, as of the writing of this particular blog, I'm in the early stages of Part II.
For those not aware, I plan to document a good portion of my crews time trapped within Sword Art Online. Part I covered the origins if you will and covered Floors 1-5. Part II will cover the push to join the front-line and is looking likely that it will cover Floors 18-25. Part III will likely be the slog of actually being the front-runners; not sure which Floors I'll set that one in yet, but in the late 40s or early 50s seem the most likely.
Part IV is where things diverge a bit and I've already spoken to Fede a little about this. My story will…
Yo
I haven't been on this wiki for like forever ever since I started my own, lmao. Before I start editing again, are there any new things on here that I should know?
By the way, I also kind of feel like this wiki is dying. There isn't much blog posts nowadays.
Christmas Wishes
This'll be my first blog post since I joined this wiki, and I think it'll probably be one of the shortest in living memory for by. All I want to say is Merry Christmas, everyone! And if you don't celebrate it, then enjoy the holidays regardless.
Hope you all have a good one, folks!
Entity Burst Online: Reasume - A review by FedeTkd
Entity Burst Online: Resume – A Review by FedeTkd
Finally.
After 5 years with nobody finishing a story, a user finally managed to finish one. For that commitment alone, Pyro deserves praise, especially when he tried and re-tried starting with a story several times.
But, is it any good? Let’s find out, shall we?
Keep into account that this review was written while considering that this is the first story written by Pyro and is a fanfiction, so I won’t be overly harsh over nitpicks. I’ll point them out, but they won’t break the story for me.
Also, this review contains spoilers. So reader discretion is advised.
Story, Game and Setting
EBO: R follows the story of Hunter Kasai, former SAO player and current EBO player who is tasked with stopping a for…
A shady little leaflet
Apparently I recieved a 'murder' threat from Fede if I should return to the wiki last summer. Only noticed today when I decided to take a look at the site where I spent more than three years writing on. I'll take my chances, I guess, by dropping this subtle little bomb.
I've given this post some thought. First back in 2017, when I disappeared from the wiki entirely without a word's notice. Too much had happened. One event lead to another disaster which lead to another catastrophe, with no room or energy to explain to others why or how those events happened. I took a sturdy gander at what I had worked towards during my puberty years and stumbled onto the conclusion that it was time to go. I made friendships here and simultaneously watched th…
SAO A: SBO Project
After three billion years, I've returned with some new inspiration for an SAO project.
Kirito is dead.
All you need to know.
Oh, and Sword Art: Origin and ALfheim Online got blended in the next-generation VR game, Spell Blade Online.
Although, you could also take a peek at the page.
I have made a Discord RP server centering around this plotline. Feel free to not jump on.
https://discord.gg/9g4MQNM
SAO Re:birth!!!
Hey would anyone be interested in a SAO roleplay on Discord? Its something that's still in the works but if anyone is interested in joining I have the link for it. You dont habe to if you dont want to.
Name: SAO RE:birth
Welcome one and all to SAO Re:birth! In this server you’ll be able to create a character of your own choosing for a chance to become one of the greatest characters in Aincrad! Explore different places that can be achieved by fighting bosses, joining in raids, and finding hidden dungeons! You can create your own guild, join one, make a party with friends, and build your skills up as well. Or, however, if you don’t want to do any of that, you can always RP IRL!!! This world is always expanding and may just be the place for you…
Character Concept
Hello, Ark here.
Been browsing the wiki for a bit, and decided to ask for your opinions of a quick rough-draft character/story concept I was thinking up for a possible side-story.
What I was thinking was that immediately after SAO incident began, one person decides to go into the game to look for a friend and (hopefully) save them. By spending the year, most of their life savings, browsing various blackmarkets, and doing various activities of questionable legality, they manage to get their hands on a NerveGear and enter SAO around one year late to the party.
Now the main problems for the new player is that they don't know where to start looking, what their friend looks like in-game, or even if they're alive or dead, and the fact they're worki…
Difference between Canon and Fanon Wiki
Hello I would like asked how would you read Japanese names you put the first name first then last name last right in the Canon Wiki of Sword Art Online if any of you edit there in that wiki the last name goes first while First name goes last this is japanese naming
New Thoughts
Never mind about the dark eyes and hair. Silver and blue is much cooler so I will do that instead. I was up most of the weekend drawing so I hope you like the charcter I drew.
My story to be
So I want to write a story about a teen in SAO who has only one arm. Before the switch he will have two arms but aftter he will look as he does in real life. He's gonna have deep dark eyes with dark hair. So for a sword skill I was thinking of a hit combo that's a dark green with a glowing red finalle for the last hit. He is also good at taekwon do (for self defense) and he has a piece of heavy duty armor on his good arm in case he needs to block an attack while his sword is currently in use or on the wrong side of his body to be ueful. but after the switch he will only have one arm down to his elbow and will make constant jokes when buying armor with a discount because he doesn't need all of it:) So let me know of any Idea's you mig…
I COULD LIVE 2: RETURN OF JAFAR
Right, I lived through that hurricane.
But that was months ago, Ishi
Whatever, I do shit on my own time.
The Other SAO Fanon Wikis That Have Failed
Ah, how the weak have fallen indeed. Several wikis and fans have tried to become THE "Sword Art Online Fanon" wiki, but they were unable to compete with us. Let us take a moment of laughte- silence for these wikis:
This wiki was actually not bad. It was well-organized and it was very popular (as it gave everyone a chance to become part of the fantasy world we all know and love). It wasn't really a "fanon" wiki; it was recognized as its own wiki. But as time went on, I guess it was too much information to process, even for the admins who created it, thus, the wiki slowly died off into nothingness. (Although, it appears some people think it's running)
You can visit the wiki here.
I'm not sure what to really think of this wiki. Sure, it was a fa…
A Noob's Project Idea: Sword Art Online: Chaos Labyrinth
Hello, guys! I'm unsure how to say this but I have a project idea. Please bear with me because it might sound stupid. Basically, I want to rewrite Sword Art Online. On the egging on from some friends on the r/SAO Discord server, I have decided to genderbend everyone in SAO (If this is a dumb idea, please bite back your comment).
Anyone of you can apply! Just comment here and choose which SAO character you want to take! I'm going to say this first though: Kirito (or in this project, Kiriko) is mine. Everyone else is open! Feel free to make more characters who correspond with this project! When you make that character please slap on the template on the page.
- Kiriko (Kirito) - owned by me
- Yuurei (Asuna)
- Quartz (Silica)
- Tiffany (Agil)
- Chelsea (Klein)…
I COULD DIE 2: ELECTRIC BOOGALOO
So guess what. ANOTHER cataclysmic hurricane is on its way to me. Two consecutively in a fucking row, god dammit.
Supposedly it's going to be way worse because it'll be stronger AND it'll hit us directly. So... THAT'S nice.
If I survive, then I'll be without power and water and internet for probably a few months in the case that the entire state manages to stay above the fucking ocean.
So, fuckin great. I'll have to sit this one out too. Bleh.
EDIT
So Irma is now officially the most powerful hurricane in recorded history. It's at 180 mph sustained winds and it's set to hit in 2 days now. So... I'm setting up plans to either get further inland or out of the state entirely. Hoping the best case scenario will happen, but most projected paths lead …
Misfortune Made Her Sword - Chapter two up!
Well, it took me an entire bloody month, but I managed to finish chapter 5 for FF so, as promised, chapter 2 is now posted on the wiki. I'm lazy as fuck, though, or it would've been up sooner. Check it out below. Cheers!
Misfortune Made Her Sword: Chapter 2
Misfortune Made Her Sword - Chapter one up!
So after sitting on my ass for the better part of the summer, I've finally decided to pick myself up and get back to actually writing my fan fic. You know, instead of deluding myself into thinking I'm making progress with a sentence here or there every four or five days... So to start, and to help motivate me, I posted the first chapter up on the wiki! Huzzah for minor accomplishments? Will probably add chapter two on here after I finish writing chapter five for FF.
Click the link below to check it out if you want. Or don't. That's cool too. But I'd love to hear what you think about it if you do. Cheers!
Misfortune Made Her Sword: Chapter 1
I can count pretty high
How high does the counter for the daily contribution badge thing go? Anybody know? I'm weirdly curious (because I want it) and also a little frightened. But I'm stubborn and at this point I might as well go for it...
Temporary Story Hiatus
So, finals are approaching. I'm almost out of school for the year, so yay. I am almost done being a high school freshman, hang in there for a few more weeks. Anyways, due to finals and the mass amounts of studying I need to do to prepare for finals, I'm gonna have to delay my monthly EBO: Resume chapter. Meaning, this month's chapter will have to be released next month, which will push back the entire monthly schedule I have back one in response. Sorry in advance to any fans of Entity Burst Online: Resume.
Chapters will begin monthly publications soon, just gonna have to wait a bit because the school year is wrapping up.
College
Hi guys.
You might've realized that I haven't been around here lately, and that's because college's being a total biatch lately. I have a LOOOOOOOOOO...OOOOOOOOOOT of things to do and to study, so I haven't been on chat lately or editing (not like I have much to edit in any way).
Also, in case you're reading my story, I haven't written a single line since I uploaded the last chapter back in March. IDK when I can continue, but it will, because believe me, I want to.
I'm also looking for a job or internship somewhere, so less time to write again.
Nevertheless, I'm still always there, looking over what's going on.
That's it. I just wanted to update you guys.
Cya later.
FedeTkd
Re:Lack of Personnel
N: There's no one here anymore
Like
Ever
Not even Nii-sama.
Who usually is here.
T: Well, he does have a job now.
N: Yeah, that's true…but even during the night, when he's usually available after his job is done, he's not there.
T: At least you know he's alive. Since he's on Persona 5 a lot.
N: I guess…
Y: What are you complaining about, then?
N: It's getting lonely here…
EUO Player Page Layout.
*Note: Hi guys. I've been meaning to create this page for a while now. As the title says, This is a layout for EUO players. This page will mostly follow the Player Page Layout, but it will have several key points I emphasize on, and that I also use for my EUO player pages. Of course, the first requirement ( and most important one as well) to create an EUO player, is to have my authorization.
Of course Here goes the introduction. Here write the character's name, his race, the role he has in your story and the story he's a character of. You should also use the Player Infobox1 here, with all the data in requires.
- 1 Appearance
- 2 Personality
- 3 Background
- 4 Relationships
- 5 Abilities
- 5.1 Endless Utopia Online
- 6 Notable Achievements
- 7 Gallery
- 8 Trivia
- 9 Layout Usage
*N…
The NTF Saga: Prologue
Prologue
November 7, 2024: Floor 75 Dungeon
The assembled players spoke to each other in tense, hushed tones, shooting nervous glances at the large double doors that led to the boss room. The musical chimes of the game menu echoed through the dimly lit antechamber as they all equipped weapons and armor and readied healing potions and buffs.
Zakira’s eyes panned the room. He couldn’t remember the last time so many guilds had come together for a boss fight. Most prominent of course were the silver and blue of the Divine Dragon Alliance, led by King Talon, and the scarlet and white of the Knights of the Blood Oath, commanded by Heathcliff. There was also the red and gray of Klein’s guild, Fuurinkazan, and the green of th…
Happy April Fools I guess?!?!
Happy 1st of April!
Truth be told my friends and my family are out to get me today so I won't be online as much today. Anyway, I hope that I can get online later today but I'm not so sure >.< Anyway, that's all I'm saying. Bai Bai
The Warlock is not dead yet. He is just on a long (and overdue) journey.
And so do the game. The Warlock just got stuck on a tragic series of catch22's.
Back from an unsourced hiatus and LitD update
I seriously hate myself for forgetting about my story Light in the Darkness, as well as how I offered to work on an opening to SAOF Arena.
I apologize for never alerting anyone about my hiatus. To be honest, when I started work on LitD, my high school allowed students to use a Chromebook, and I used that thing A LOT, including to check on things here every day and also to write my story. In May, they took the Chromebooks back, I had to take final exams, and I kinda forgot once I graduated in June. I told myself I should get back to LitD, but I never remembered to work on it some more. The last I remember, I was working on Chapter Five, so I plan to finish it by next week, and get back to uploading Chapters once a week. I also have plans to …
INTERNET RETURN
MY INTERNET IS BACK UP
A FUCKING MONTH ON THIS FINICKY USB THAT DISCONNECTS IF A GNAT FARTS ON THE FAR WALL
CHEWING THROUGH DATA LIKE A CRAZY PERSON
NO MORE
HIGH SPEED CRUISING UP AND RUNNING ONCE MORE
I'm so fucking happy
I may not be on chat for awhile.
S i guess i should explain. Today i had test and i mother made it abundtely clear i had to go. However my computer time was wrong because of the black out Yesteday (at least that was what i was told) and was a hour behind. When i found out it was already 8:20 (school starts at 8:00). The teacher of my class already dislikes me becuase i came late multiple tikes prior and had called in my mother once.
So a few minutes called to find out if i went and got extremely angry with me. Then told me that she is taking the computer and if i don't go today she'll tell the teachers. Right now i'm extremely hurt mainly cause she didn't even allow me to properly explain , she is taking one of the more important aspects of my life (the thing that allows m…
Hey guys! I'm Bored.
The weirdest thing has been happening, no one has been on SAOF Chat today? I'm confused, because it's usually the most active during this time ;-; I feel like you guys are avoiding me on purpose. I even went to the extent of going to a random wikia and talking because I WAS THE BORED. Someone save me, I don't even know what to do, it's so boring and i feel like im going to die of boredom.
I COULD LIVE
I AM SUPER ALIVE.
Came super close, though.
The storm decided to wobble just a little bit further off the coast when it passed by my place. It could've been a lot worse. A LOT worse. If it was any closer, I wouldn't have a home anymore. The winds got so strong it took an entire hotel's side down. You can see into the rooms from the side. Gas station awnings are flipped over or torn to shreds. Road signs are on the ground, and so are trees, if they aren't in houses. Some house roofs are just gone. A1A, a road going northbound, has an entire lane that's gone. The sand underneath it was pulled out by the storm and the asphalt just collapsed underneath it. There's a ton of damage, millions of dollars worth. But the good news is that at most only…
Hiatus (AGAIN)
So, yeah I'm going on a really long hiatus. I'm planning on coming back somewhere in December or maybe not at all. Apparently I'm not wanted here, so I'll take a break. Sorry If I don't talk to you guys, I'm not going to make excuses. Yes, I was being a bitch (excuse my language to those who care). So yeah. I'm leaving. Sorry guys. I'll be back whenever I guess. Cya around... SAOF.
I COULD DIE
According to the news, anyway.
A state of emergency has been issued in all of Florida due to the apparently apocalyptic hurricane that's going to be coming around pretty soon, like within a week. Evacuations might happen, power outages WILL happen, large scale destruction all over the place, oh, my, what a bad time.
So I could be, like, completely gone for a few days sometime within the week or so, depending. The Florida governor says that shit's gon' get fucked, so I'm writing this pre-emptively just in case things really do get fucked, though I've lived along the coast of Florida for years and have never needed to evacuate or anything ever, and the hurricane is supposed to just scrape by the east coast instead of hitting us dead-on like a …
I wrote a rough draft of a story, I guess
That title though. So, I decided to write a story last night, just out of random ideas I had.
The names are temporary, because I was too lasy to thing of good names.
It's terrible, but I was bored.
One final blast, and the beast fell. "Well, this place is cleared up!" I tossed my gun upwards into the air, pulled the small energy clip out of my pocket, and caught the pistol, sliding the clip into place simultaneously. Or at least, that's what a cooler version of me would do. Rather, my pistol was on the floor, and I was out of ammo. Letting out an exasperated sigh, I bent down to pick it up. When will I grow out of wanting to strike a pose when reloading? I asked myself, before laughing at my own thoughts that's an easy question, never!
I turned a…
Considering a partial return
I may be kinda coming back, soon. I've been lonely recently, because I really have no one to talk to.
If I do come back, it won't be the 24/7 thing it was before. I'll pop up every now and then, but only when I feel like it.
And if any drama starts to rouse up, I'd go on hiatus. The last thing I need right now is some stupid drama on my mind.
Off My Hiatus For Real
WELL I AM BACK GUYS I AM BACK FOR GOOD MY PC IS BACK AND I AM HERE FOR GOOD I AM JUST REPEATING MYSELF ARENT I OKAY MIKAELA CALM DOWN.
Ok hi, I'm back. That's pretty much it.
RPNation Doesn't Let Me Upload Images From My Hard Drive
So I have to put things I save here as a URL.
Please Understand.
I didn't know what to call this :P
The ED for Danganronpa 3: Despair Arc is sung by the voice actor of Komaeda Nagito... AS Komaeda...
Ultimate Lucky Student? Pffff. More like Ultimate Bob Ross Level Of Calming Voice
Well then...
My iPad is in working condition once again. Don't ask how, I honestly have no idea. But this blog is not me coming back, however.
I've been able to spend time on many more things I like to do ever since I got seperated from the wiki. I've spent more time with my family, I'm more active, and I'm free from all that drama. So yeah, I have decided to stay away from the wiki.
That's all I have to say. Goodbye.
WEAPON ART REQUESTS
So... I've been thinking about potentially opening a request pool. What I'm going to do if I take requests is weapon art. You've probably seen some of my weapon art around the wiki. For example, I'll list a few of the weapons I've drawn. Defiance, Dusk and Dawn, and Stampede are a few. They're not my best, I understand that. But that's not the point. My point is: I will draw the weapon you request. Anyone may ask me a request, just comment below what it is. I will provide colored drawings, but I might not have the proper colored pencils for the request. So if you know how to manipulate images, just take your finished request and manipulate the colors on the image to your liking.
Once again, here are the details: Post your weapon art request …
Hiatus.... And a long one at that....
So... My iPad is broken. Yep. Done, dead, won't turn on, left it on the charger overnight, tried numerous times to turn the blasted thing on, nothing. So, yeah. Kami/Megami is gone. I have a message for each of you guys.
- Ishi: I know you haven't liked me for a while now, and there is nothing I can do to change that. But I'll still miss you, man. You remind me of more good times than bad, it is not easy to say goodbye.
- Pyro: Even though we only got along what I'd say a 50/50 amount, I still consider you a friend. You are a cool guy, actually. Yeah, you are impulsive, but I think I have been way to much of a jerk about that. So I am sorry. Being impulsive is not always a bad thing. Bye bye...
- Djinn: Our friendship is a roller coaster, ain't it?…
VRMMO Adoptables
Just made this blog so I can discard some old drawings and draw new ones. I want to draw at least one character for each VRMMO on this wiki. I will be submitting these characters for adoption, meaning if you guys want one it's up for grabs. I don't think I will be perfect on the interpretations of how your VRMMO characters should look, so don't expect much.
Next VRMMO: Enchanted Realm Online
Wolfram: End War Online Version?
Is it a waifu material enough though?
Here's another with Wolfram wielding Lies & Deception.
SAOF Arena: New Skill Setting
'sup people. I'm here to explain a new standard to be used to the SAOF Arena pages. It is called Damage Calculation.
The new standard to be used uses the same system League of Legends does for calculating damage. Here's the formula they use for Attack-Defense and Magic-Magic Defense:
User's Attack x ( 100 / ( 100 + Target's Defense ) ) = Total Damage Dealt
This is the standard formula to be used for normal attacks. While...
Fixed Skill Damage + User's Magic x ( 100 / ( 100 + Target's Magic Defense ) )
... this one is for skills if it uses magic; and...
Fixed Skill Damage + User's Attack x ( 100 / ( 100 + Target's Defense ) )
... if it is a sword skill.
That means for skills, you must use these formulae. Here's Wolfram's Red Card skill for example.
(…
RIP My eyesight T-T
I think I need glasses... The double vision in my right eye is getting worse, not to mention that it's slightly blurry ON TOP of the DV... and my left eye's starting to die away as well... So yeah... I may need glasses... or contacts but I prefer glasses. How else am I gonna flip off people without it being obvious?