Thread:Kenji Hiroshi/@comment-5470513-20191014213759/@comment-2182964-20191014225016

Hey there!

The overall story told in each chapter hasn't changed, but I have included more details, whilst moving around a few of the dates (1st chapter takes place a day earlier). Had an inkling that there were a few clashes, and this was confirmed when I re-read both Progressive and the original novels. The descriptions, especially how my characters actually feel, have also been touched on a lot more. I've also improved the grammar a fair bit.

I certainly enjoyed expanding on them, and I hope the changes I've made have improved them. The plan is to eventually give all my currently published chapters the same treatment. As of this message the first three have been completed and I've published three others: Inbetweeners I, II and III.

So, yeah. I'd recommend you give them a re-read. And thanks for taking the time to read them initially!