Thread:Jono46/@comment-5470513-20160130192253/@comment-25804785-20160206100510

A motorcycle sped down the highway.

‘Of course. Here I am again, speeding to the Detroixa Sector after a corrupted soul. It’s like the Detroit of Solaxia…ohhh. I get it now. Wow. As per usual, the great Hunter has struck a genius move again.’

There was a beeping noise a red light flashed on the dashboard of the motorcycle.

‘I’m here.’

Hunter swerved down an alleyway and parked his bike.

“Now you stay there.” he said to the motorcycle,

He walked out the alleyway and down a crappy little street filled with rubbish and broken glass.

“Disgusting.” he said to himself.

Hunter drew a handgun from its holster which was placed sideways on the back of his belt.

“Hey! Corrupted soul, come out, come out wherever you are!” he called out.

Some trash rustled behind him. Hunter’s quick reflexes caused him to spin around and shoot at the trash pile and open fire on it. A cockroach crawled out from underneath the mound.

“Wow, I’ve outdone myself today on the genius meter.” he joked.

He turned back around to see the hideous face of a corrupted soul.

“GAHH!” he yelled as he leapt back and fell on the ground.

“Hello handsome.”

The soul screeched at him.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Crap. It’s a she.”

<p class="MsoNormal">The corrupted soul inched closer as it snarled.

<p class="MsoNormal">“I’m sorry! It’s just that you’re so beautiful I didn’t realise what gender you were!”

<p class="MsoNormal">“Oh yeah, that’s a thing!” snarled the soul.

<p class="MsoNormal">‘Damn it I hate the realistic AI. It’s so freakin’ creepy.’ Hunter thought.

<p class="MsoNormal">“So, uh…H…How’s it going? Do you have a wi…I mean husband or...used to?” he babbled.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Humans, so pathetic. You can practically taste their fear. I’m so glad I’m not one anymore.” spoke the soul.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Geez. I was just trying to create small talk. I heard all the ladies are into it nowadays.” mumbled Hunter, “I also wanted to find out if there was anyone I had to apologise to.”

<p class="MsoNormal">“For what?” asked the soul.

<p class="MsoNormal">“This.” Hunter said in a bad-ass tone.

<p class="MsoNormal">He quickly aimed his gun at her head and fired. She dodged with ease and formed her arm into a whip, slapping the gun out of his hand.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Pfft. Weak.” she cackled.

<p class="MsoNormal">“NO! SOUL!” he yelled.

<p class="MsoNormal">“How cute, you named your weapon.” the soul mocked.

<p class="MsoNormal">“You’ve made her brother angry now.” Hunter said angrily.

<p class="MsoNormal">Hunter snatched the gun from its holster on his left side. He quickly stood up and aimed it at her head.

<p class="MsoNormal">“This is Slayer. He’s very protective of his sister. You just separated her from him. Now he’s angry!” he explained.

<p class="MsoNormal">The barrel of the gun glowed blue as Hunter charged an attack.

<p class="MsoNormal">“Now what did that Austrian actor say. I think his name was Avold or something. Ah yes, I believe it was…” Hunter paused, “Hasta la vista, baby!”

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