User blog comment:Don'tHateOnFate/Clashing Blades Review/@comment-3436482-20141231230516/@comment-3436482-20150101035751

Okay then...

Well for cons, I get how gameplay isn't completely accurate. Considering I only watched four episodes of the series that was bound to happen. I guess I kind of made Skeith and Corbenik to give myself a loophole out of some stuff.

Characters being god-like. Yep.

The ending was super rushed because I couldn't figure out how to do that part too well.

And with detail... that's just a thing I do. I go into detail, that's one of my traits in my writing style, I guess.

I'm trying to improve on everything with Shattered Boundaries (shut up, Fede), and I got Sword Art Online: Blade Master possibly in the works that I'll use to refine the story and work out the kinks and stuff. Characterization especially... ulgh...