User blog comment:The Redundant Button/Misfortune Made Her Sword - Chapter one up!/@comment-5470513-20170722032437/@comment-5470513-20170722151203

Just one tip about your characters: don't chew more than you can swallow. Don't fill your story with characters you won't be able to decently develop.

And don't think badly about your first fanfic, it's helps you to remind you from how far you came from.