User blog:Aikenarrows/Newest Chapter In Need of Reviews

Hey guys! I just completed the newest chapter of my series, "Right Back At It Again", and I am in need of reviews badly. This is one of my longest chapters so far and I need some constructive criticism to see if I'm doing well in the direction that I'm going. To check it out, go to the wiki page, Sword Art Online: Right Back At It Again, and click on either the Chapter 4 link and comment below the blog to post your review or go to the complete series link to go to fanfiction.net and post your review. If you just want to go directly to those links, here they are below:

Chapter 4 Link:

http://draclink.blogspot.com/2014/09/right-back-at-it-again-chapter-4.html

Fanfiction.net Link:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10638433/1/Right-Back-At-It-Again

In addition, if you would like to be the editor of my series, I would greatly appreciate it. Although I can't really pay you, I will deliver virtual cookies to you and long distance hugs.

Thanks!